Wednesday, September 23, 2009

Forests

The forest was laying quiet
Like a dormant grizzly bear
And Quiet were the creatures
That made their homesteads there.

They stood like wooden giants,
in their thick, hard maple gown
and as the warm fall brezze
blew throguh the trees
They watched the sun go down.

And as the sun went down
the glowing moon
came rising from the red
he stood up high and waited there
and put them all to bed.

3 comments:

  1. Hey "T", good poem. You spelled wooden wrong. I like your personification of the trees.

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  2. oh crap yeah you're right 0MG33Z U S4V3D M4H L1V3z TH4NK UZ3

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  3. You also spelled breeze wrong....FYI

    Again smart use of similes here to draw comparisons. You really do use imagery well in your writing.

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